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Topic vs. thesis statement
A topic is general and very broad. For example, you might write a paper about pollution. You could write this paper for a LONG time unless you narrow the field.

Ask yourself questions:
What kind?
What geographical area?
What environmental anomalies?
Who is effected?specific age group?

A thesis statement focuses on one particular section of the broad topic and covers it in detail. A thesis statement is more than a mere statement; it must be defensible.

Step 1: Make a statement
Pollution is a serious issue in urban centres.......
BECAUSE

Step 2: Outline your defense
a) it leads to the release of dangerous chemicals into the air, water, and soil
b)............................................................................................................
c)............................................................................................................

Thesis statement
Thesis statement reveals:
  • central message of the essay
  • should convince and persuade the reader
  • without a thesis, the essay lacks direction and purpose, and wanders from point to point
  • purpose of the paper
  • relevance to the topic
  • indicates of direction of the essay

Introductions
Like any good reading material, the introduction should grab the reader's interest or attention, so he or she will continue reading your essay.


What does an introduction do?

• sets the stage
• establishes the context
• gets to the heart of things quickly
• includes thesis statement

Devices

• relevant background information
• brief, interesting story/anecdote
• pertinent statistic(s)
• appropriate quotation
• analogy
• definition of term(s)
• identification of situation

What to avoid in your Introduction:

• "The purpose of my essay is ?"
• "I am going to write about?"
• cliches or commonplace ideas: "Since the dawn of time, people have fallen in love."
• apologies: "I am not sure this is right, but this is my opinion."
• repetition of the topic


The Body of the Paper
If you remember SAY IT...SUPPORT IT.... EXPLAIN IT, you will have the three essential components of every paragraph you write. Each paragraph should have one idea which you introduce, support with material from other sources, and synthesize. The last element is your defense or explanation of the importance of the paragraph to your thesis.



Conclusions

• Brings essay to an end
• Logically follows from thesis statement and discussion

Devices

• Answers question in introduction
• Summarizes main points
• Calls for awareness, action, resolution from the reader
• Anticipates future possibilities

What to avoid in your Conclusion:

• Don’t trail off
• Don’t include new ideas or facts that belong in main body of essay
• Don’t reword the introduction
• Don’t announce what you have done
• Don’t apologize


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